Bailey Brook Review
Excellent fiction story. Late Night Swim is short and to the point. Good sentence structure. It leaves an edge of mystery to let the audience come to their own conclusion while teasing us a little bit. That is awesome. I try to do that and it's so difficult! I psych myself out over it. Congrats, Bailey. Very well written story.
The poem was more of the same. It was sad-but-not-sad, and gave us a little picture in our head. The whole three words to one word thing was cute, and to the point. It was short but told a story. Part of that story was us in our heads, so it was awesome! Maybe this was just me, but, hey, I'm the one reviewing it, so who cares?
Bailey is a Warrior of Writing because she knows her talents and makes a point to use them. She's confident and brave and modest, and gives just the right amount of attention to any point of a story to make sure it's told exactly how she wants.
~~E. M. Zeray